My first rap. what u folks think?

rhymewise i do the figure eight so concisely


lyrically i am the erb so sit back and light me.


storming thru ur raps with th musical lightning


frightning, the only way to describe my words


breaking you down cause i'm loud and absurd.


yea heard? werd. cuz u gotsa learn


hows it gonna feel when u get a real burn.


white boy cam gonna teach you some terms,


go ahead and sell em, afford your next perm.


pretty boy rappin is the way of the game,


flow went down the river no its all about the fame.


fuckbitches get money aint why i came.


nowadays rappers try so hard to be the same


tame motherfuckers on the road thats been paved.


trailblazin died along with biggie and pac


now pppl want the quickest way to the top,


ever notice when they get there they just drop?


like flies to the ceiling fan crushed and forgot.





bringn it back the simplified track


catchy as **** man my words is like tack.


specialized weapons and tactics to back


my facts up, my chips are stacked up


high roller when it comes to the truth


outplayin most while im still in my youth.


loose tongue suckas i be readin their tells


say they sellin music when they just sellin bells


and whistles nd muthafuckin .22 pistols.


i see thru ur act like some polished crystal.





lookin at the state of western music today,


people of the nation should be feelin betrayed.


electronic voices makin millions of bucks


sellin out venues nobody gives a ****.


about talented rappers who be spittin they rhymes


generation X don't even give em the time.


chemical junkies never had no pride.


slide a pill down they throat and go for a ride.


think you got skills? you should go get a job.


cause if you think u gettin signed then u just gettin robbed





get a clue get a clue


rap is dead within you


but i choose to stay true


to myself not the crew.


but if you conclude that


there's something wrong, too


then maybe we can move on





Someone plz tell me how to post the audio i recorded w/out getting a myspace account.





also tell me what u think of the lyrics.My first rap. what u folks think?
lyrics not bad but also not the best i seen some like lil kid rhymes but not a lot it made cents it didnt go off topic so good job i couldn't see how the flow would go but if you find out how to record it let me know but 7/10

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